diff --git a/pup_land/hall2 b/pup_land/hall2
index db1c98b9c..77c2b30b7 100644
--- a/pup_land/hall2
+++ b/pup_land/hall2
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
 enter_y 1
 msg
 Created:  1996-04-11
-Modified: 2011-12-01 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2012-02-21 Rick Tanner
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 end
 arch cobblestones2
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ name Chronicle of Pupland
 msg
 Welcome wanderer,
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-Pupland is huge, great adventures await you. These maps contain more "action" and storyline than most. As you advance, the tasks will become more and more difficult - Don't forget that the finest of artifacts are waiting for you!  And always keep in mind: *Anything* can happen on Pupland maps. Don't be afraid of the unexpected...
+Pupland is huge, great adventures await you.  These maps contain more "action" and storyline than most.  As you advance, the tasks will become more and more difficult - Don't forget that the finest of artifacts are waiting for you!  And always keep in mind: *Anything* can happen on Pupland maps.  Don't be afraid of the unexpected...
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 x 3
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