From 0b4ca7903746aac399c2ba8abcaa480ad2d93a5b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kbulgrien Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2010 02:17:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] - Grammar police on patrol ;-) Capitalize proper names. Replace use of passive voice from the Getting out of Scorn description to better match the style of other descriptions (but leave other occurances alone). Replace contractions (won't). past --> pass. Change use of "you" to "me" to improve consistency with the rest of the file. git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@13456 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712 --- scorn/citygate.quests | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/scorn/citygate.quests b/scorn/citygate.quests index a982ba5dc..c85b338c7 100644 --- a/scorn/citygate.quests +++ b/scorn/citygate.quests @@ -1,23 +1,23 @@ quest scorn/CityGate -title Getting out of scorn +title Getting out of Scorn description -The main gates of the city of scorn are locked, and the guards won't let you past. +The main gates of the city of Scorn are locked, and the guards will not let you pass. end_description restart 0 step 5 description -I need to find a way to be allowed through the gates of scorn. +I need to find a way to get permission to pass through the gates of Scorn. end_description end_step step 10 description -In order to be let past I need to get a port pass, find the password, or become the hero of scorn. Perhaps one of the guards can give me some advice on how to do these things. +In order to pass through the gate I need to get a port pass, find the password, or become a hero of Scorn. Perhaps one of the guards can give me some advice on how to do these things. end_description end_step step 20 finishes_quest description -I have been permitted to pass through scorn city gate. +I have been permitted to pass through Scorn city gate. end_description end_step end_quest @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ end_quest quest scorn/PortGate title Down to the docks description -There is a gate separating the main part of scorn from the docks. It is closed and the guards won't let you past. +There is a gate separating the main part of Scorn from the docks. It is closed and the guards will not let me pass. end_description restart 0 step 5 @@ -35,13 +35,13 @@ end_description end_step step 10 description -To pass through the gates I need to get a port pass, find the password or become the hero of scorn. Perhaps one of the guards will tell me how I can do one of those things. +To pass through the gates I need to get a port pass, find the password or become a hero of Scorn. Perhaps one of the guards will tell me how I can do one of those things. end_description end_step step 20 finishes_quest description -I have been granted passage through scorn port gate. +I have been granted passage through Scorn port gate. end_description end_step end_quest @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ quest scorn/GatePass title Gate Pass parent scorn/CityGate description -Acquire a gate pass to be allowed out of the main gate of scorn. +Acquire a gate pass to be allowed out of the main gate of Scorn. end_description restart 0 step 10 @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ end_description end_step step 20 description -I found some graffiti on the wall of goth's tavern, which claimed that the gate Password was "Chain" +I found some graffiti on the wall of Goth's tavern, which claimed that the gate Password was "chain". end_description end_step step 30 @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ end_description restart 0 step 10 description -I have spoken with Alfalfa in scorn jail, she was arrested for streaking and now the guards won't give her any clothes. She asked me to fetch something for her to wear from her house. Fran at the Barking Mule keeps a spare key for her house. +I have spoken with Alfalfa in Scorn jail, she was arrested for streaking and now the guards won't give her any clothes. She asked me to fetch something for her to wear from her house. Fran at the Barking Mule keeps a spare key for her house. end_description end_step step 20