From 20f781ce95eed17f83b859859f9e07857302c19d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kbulgrien Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2009 01:14:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] - Rework some grammar and remove linebreaks from a message. git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@12132 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712 --- scorn/misc/kboldtemp1b4 | 9 +++------ 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/scorn/misc/kboldtemp1b4 b/scorn/misc/kboldtemp1b4 index 45c123256..3ec3a4cb7 100644 --- a/scorn/misc/kboldtemp1b4 +++ b/scorn/misc/kboldtemp1b4 @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ enter_x 3 enter_y 11 msg Created: 2004-08-03 Mikeeusa -Modified: 2008-11-27 lalo +Modified: 2009-08-03 Kevin Bulgrien endmsg outdoor 1 end @@ -1857,7 +1857,7 @@ y 1 end arch sign msg -We have finally recovered our altar which had been stolen by this damn kobolds. We looked everywhere for it, who'd have thought they would take over this abandoned temple and hide the altar on the bottom! We wonder what their motivation was... maybe they can't tell altars apart? Or they expected they'd be able to reconsecrate it? Fools. +We have finally recovered the altar that had been stolen from us by these cursed kobolds. We looked everywhere for it; who'd have thought they would take over this abandoned temple and hide the altar on the bottom! We wonder what their motivation was... maybe they can't tell altars apart? Or maybe they expected they'd be able to reconsecrate it? Fools. Anyway. Praised be The Brave, The Just. The altar is back where it belongs, in our chapel under the barracks. endmsg @@ -1883,10 +1883,7 @@ y 3 end arch magic_mouth msg -You hear angry noises behind the door. -Whatever is in there, sounds more dangerous -than a kobold. You wonder if you should -just leave it alone. +You hear angry noises behind the door. Whatever is in there, sounds more dangerous than a kobold. You wonder if you should just leave it alone. endmsg x 14 y 4