diff --git a/navar_city/slums/rockgardens b/navar_city/slums/rockgardens
index a3705d043..33f4027ce 100644
--- a/navar_city/slums/rockgardens
+++ b/navar_city/slums/rockgardens
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 11
 enter_y 2
 msg
 Created: 2003-10-10 Avion
-Modified: 2023-06-07 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-26 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 outdoor 1
 end
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ msg
 @match young
 Well when you are as old as me everyone else is a young one...
 @match yes|upstairs
-I never go up there - I think it's haunted. Anyway sometimes folk never come back down...
+I never go up there - I think it's haunted. Anyway, sometimes folk never come back down...
 @match *
 Hello there young one. Headed upstairs?
 endmsg
@@ -3983,7 +3983,7 @@ Yes, the little scamps are playing upstairs.
 @match food
 Those boys sure have a healthy appetite.
 @match *
-Hello have you come to play with the boys?
+Hello, have you come to play with the boys?
 endmsg
 x 13
 y 44