From 25993f17aaeaef09062c441ca1a5fa640605dc97 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Rick Tanner Date: Tue, 28 Nov 2023 00:21:48 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] Minor spelling, wording, and grammar updates to NPC dialogue in Ship Wreck Village --- port_joseph/pirates/madvillage | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/port_joseph/pirates/madvillage b/port_joseph/pirates/madvillage index c50257e25..350416883 100644 --- a/port_joseph/pirates/madvillage +++ b/port_joseph/pirates/madvillage @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 13 enter_y 8 msg Created: 1994-06-05 langley (langley@fermat.dartmouth.edu) -Modified: 2023-06-06 Rick Tanner +Modified: 2023-11-28 Rick Tanner endmsg reset_group portjoseph_moogly-bill end @@ -1041,15 +1041,15 @@ I am Orville, the sailor we came in search of treasure but I have given up hope. @match sane|mad We've been shipwrecked on this island for many years. They've all gone mad except me. @match treasure -Yes, Moogly Bill's treasure is buried on this island. It no longer matters to me any more. We are the result of such greed. +Yes, Moogly Bill's treasure is buried on this island. It no longer matters to me anymore. We are the result of such greed. @match island We came to search for buried treasure but we shipwrecked on the reefs. There are many dangers on this island. @match danger -Yes I've encountered much on my explorations of the island. It abounds with poisonous creatures. A Behemoth roams across the river. Then there are the guardians of Moogly Bill's stones! +Yes, I've encountered much on my explorations of the island. It abounds with poisonous creatures. A Behemoth roams across the river. Then there are the guardians of Moogly Bill's stones! @match stones|guardians -Yes, Moogly Bill hid three stones which open the way to his buried treasure. One is hidden aboard an old shipwreck. One in a temple and I believe the other is across the river. +Yes, Moogly Bill hid three stones that opened the way to his buried treasure. One is hidden aboard an old shipwreck. One is in a temple and I believe the other is across the river. @match shipwreck -We were not the first to shipwreck here. There is an old galleon but its crew protect it from the grave. +We were not the first to shipwreck here. There is an old galleon but its crew protects it from the grave. @match temple Ah, the statue used to point northeast to the temple, till an earthquake shook its foundations. The temple is deep in the jungle. @match behemoth @@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ The most terrifying creature I have seen, but quite stupid. It usually stays on @match river The river runs with strange magical currents. The Behemoth roams the western banks. @match moogly|bill -The most terrible pirate who every roamed the seas. And the ruin of me. Curse my greed! All the others have gone mad by know. +The most terrible pirate who ever roamed the seas. And the ruin of me. Curse my greed! All the others have gone mad by now. @match * You don't know how happy I am to hear a sane voice. endmsg