diff --git a/pup_land/s_f/to-jyo b/pup_land/s_f/to-jyo
index 40a962b08..5877af46d 100644
--- a/pup_land/s_f/to-jyo
+++ b/pup_land/s_f/to-jyo
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 9
 enter_y 13
 msg
 Created:  1996-02-09
-Modified: 2020-10-01 SilverNexus
+Modified: 2023-11-02 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch sea
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ You may read my research note upstairs, but keep off the CRYSTAL, okay?! It woul
 @match crystal
 If you are tempted, call me for "help."
 @match odo
-Odo was a mighty god in the ancient world.  Odo helped and protected the early civilization on these islands... The people were ungrateful, so Odo took away the artifacts he had made for his disciples, locked them up in an underground tower and left this world.  Soon the people forgot about Odo...
+Odo was a mighty god in the ancient world. Odo helped and protected the early civilization on these islands... The people were ungrateful, so Odo took away the artifacts he had made for his disciples, locked them up in an underground tower, and left this world. Soon the people forgot about Odo...
 @match *
 Hello, boy.
 endmsg
@@ -2256,7 +2256,7 @@ arch sage
 name To-jyo
 msg
 @match odo
-Odo was a mighty god in the ancient world.  Odo helped and protected the early civilization on these islands... The people were ungrateful, so Odo took away the artifacts he had made for his disciples, locked them up in an underground tower and left this world.  Soon the people forgot about Odo...
+Odo was a mighty god in the ancient world. Odo helped and protected the early civilization on these islands... The people were ungrateful, so Odo took away the artifacts he had made for his disciples, locked them up in an underground tower and left this world. Soon the people forgot about Odo...
 @match *
 Ouch! My hip is broken!
 endmsg