Grammar and spelling corrections to NPC dialog

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Rick Tanner 2021-10-17 01:57:36 -05:00
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@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Creator: jesse@phiwumbda.org
Date: 2008-01-21
This dark cave looks like a Dwarven mine town, fallen on very hard times indeed. The ogrish lot at the mouth of the cave seems fairly pleased with its plunder!
Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
end
arch dirtfloor
@ -6082,7 +6082,7 @@ y 30
end
arch magic_mouth
msg
The ruins appear to be dwarven. Apparently a mining town.
The ruins appear to be dwarven. Apparently a mining town.
endmsg
x 13
y 30
@ -9022,15 +9022,15 @@ name A distracted necromancer
title the Necromancer
msg
@match dwarf|dwarves
Dwarves? There were no dwarves when I moved here. Just a few easily persuaded ogres.
Dwarves? There were no dwarves when I moved here. Just a few easily persuaded ogres.
@match ogre|giant
The ogre army? They're not with me. This cave is large enough to share and it took only a little persuasion before they agreed.
The ogre army? They're not with me. This cave is large enough to share and it took only a little persuasion before they agreed.
@match mine
Yes, this area appears to be an abandoned mine town. I've been too busy with my research to explore it deeply. I'm afraid that once I put in my security, I've rarely ventured outside this study.
Yes, this area appears to be an abandoned mine town. I've been too busy with my research to explore it deeply. I'm afraid that once I put in my security, I've rarely ventured outside this study.
@match stairs|down
Feel free to look around downstairs, but I warn you to leave my possessions be.
@match key
The door is locked for a reason. There is no reason for you to venture there.
The door is locked for a reason. There is no reason for you to venture there.
@match treasure
Please stay out of my things.
@match *

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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ height 60
msg
Creator: jesse
Date: 2008-01-22
Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
end
arch cave_15
@ -1896,17 +1896,17 @@ end
arch dwarf_priest
msg
@match yes|letter
Have you word from our friends? Please, step forward and deliver it!
Have you heard from our friends? Please, step forward and deliver it!
@match no|where|giant|ogre
The giant army is from the Red Foot tribe. The Red Foots are located in the mountains north of the nearby inn. If our dwarven brothers still live, they are likely being held there.
The giant army is from the Red Foot tribe. The Red Foots are located in the mountains north of the nearby inn. If our dwarven brothers still live, they are likely being held there.
@match wizard|glint|necromancer
Some time after the battle against the ogres, a wizard arrived. We do not know much about him, but it appears that he has chosen our outpost as his home.
Sometime after the battle against the ogres, a wizard arrived. We do not know much about him, but it appears that he has chosen our outpost as his home.
We have heard battles raging upstairs, perhaps between the giants and the wizard's minions. But the battles have been silent for some time now.
We have heard battles raging upstairs, perhaps between the giants and the wizard's minions. But the battles have been silent for some time now.
We would be most appreciative if you can help rid us of this new threat, but I am afraid we have no more reward to offer you.
@match *
Welcome! We have been in hiding here since the giant army invaded our mining outpost. The battle was bloody and many dwarves were captured. Our only protection is this secret room and the spirits of our ancestors.
Welcome! We have been in hiding here since the giant army invaded our mining outpost. The battle was bloody and many dwarves were captured. Our only protection is this secret room and the spirits of our ancestors.
Have you perchance stumbled across our captive brethren?
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@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ msg
Creator: jesse
Date: 2008-01-25
An ogre stronghold.
Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
end
arch blocked
@ -2957,17 +2957,17 @@ arch dwarf_wiz
name Snortrider
msg
@match letter|outpost
Our mining town is not far. Head east from the Inn until you find a footpath going south. Our town is in the mountains at the end of the path.
Our mining town is not far. Head east from the Inn until you find a footpath going south. Our town is in the mountains at the end of the path.
Once in the cave, you must find the tombs. Our brothers are hidden in a secret room near there.
Once in the cave, you must find the tombs. Our brothers are hidden in a secret room near there.
@match yes|yeah
Wonderful! Please, take this letter.
@match *
Thank Mostrai you have arrived! We were captured by the Red Foot ogres in a terrible battle in our mining outpost south east of here.
Thank Mostrai you have arrived! We were captured by the Red Foot ogres in a terrible battle in our mining outpost southeast of here.
A small group managed to escape capture by hiding in the tombs of the outpost. I am sure they are there still. We will raise arms to re-take the outpost and drive the giants out for good.
A small group managed to escape capture by hiding in the tombs of the outpost. I am sure they are there still. We will raise arms to re-take the outpost and drive the giants out for good.
If you can deliver this letter to the outpost, we would be most grateful. You will be well-rewarded. Will you accept this task?
If you can deliver this letter to the outpost, we would be most grateful. You will be well-rewarded. Will you accept this task?
endmsg
x 12
y 35

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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 5
enter_y 10
msg
Created: 1999-02-03 King Zoobus
Modified: 2021-07-21 Saiapatsu
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
outdoor 1
end
@ -468,10 +468,10 @@ end
arch holy_priest
msg
@match darcap
Ah, I did not realize how far you have travelled. Darcap is the city to the north of here. The long road shall take you there. I shall pray for your safety.
Ah, I did not realize how far you have traveled. Darcap is the city to the north of here. The long road shall take you there. I shall pray for your safety.
@match *
@question darcap Where is Darcap?
You have come a long way, stranger. I feel this must be an omen. You must visit the high priest in Darcap.
You have come a long way, stranger. I feel this must be an omen. You must visit the high priest in Darcap.
endmsg
x 5
y 4
@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ arch northman
name warrior
msg
@match *
I have come a long way to have my child baptised.
I have come a long way to have my child baptized.
endmsg
hp 250
x 6

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@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enter_x 1
enter_y 5
msg
Created: 1993-10-28
Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
end
arch dungeon_floor
@ -161,11 +161,11 @@ end
arch guard
msg
@match death|smell
Can't you smell it? Must be a couple hundred corpses up in the mountains all rotting and decaying to make a stench like that.
Can't you smell it? Must be a couple of hundred corpses up in the mountains all rotting and decaying to make a stench like that.
@match corpses|dead
Of course.. nothing, and I meaning nothing.. could smell that bad.
@match *
Sheesh! The smell of death when the wind comes over the mountains to the west make standing at this post unbearable!!
Sheesh! The smell of death, when the wind comes over the mountains to the west, makes standing at this post unbearable!!
endmsg
x 1
y 11
@ -902,7 +902,7 @@ They came down from the mountains and attacked, dozens of them and we barely esc
@match attack|ambush
The monsters were in some sort of frenzy when they attacked, they were so vicious and ruthless - like nothing we have seen before.
@match mountains|mountain
There must be some huge battle happening in the mountain peaks and surrounding valleys. Stench of rotting flesh is overwhelming.
There must be some huge battle happening in the mountain peaks and surrounding valleys. The stench of rotting flesh is overwhelming.
@match *
We were heading north with some trade goods when some monsters ambushed us!
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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
enter_y 1
msg
Created: 2003-10-10 Avion
Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
outdoor 1
end
@ -1581,7 +1581,7 @@ arch woman2
name Shelly
msg
@match smuggler|smugglers
Yes yes these horrible smugglers kidnapped me.
Yes yes, these horrible smugglers kidnapped me.
@match *
Oh please save me from these smugglers!
endmsg

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@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enter_x 1
enter_y 5
msg
Created: 1994-08-27 langley (langley@fermat.dartmouth.edu)
Modified: 2012-02-20 Rick Tanner
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
end
arch dungeon_floor
@ -1872,9 +1872,9 @@ msg
@match help|knowledge|quest|what
The goblins caught me as I was searching these dungeons, but I found a word of power.
@match word|power
Yes, the word of power is `ogsnog'. There are four words of power. Speak these in the shrine below. I do not know the other three words. Beware for the shrine has been overrun with ooze.
Yes, the word of power is "ogsnog." There are four words of power. Speak these in the shrine below. I do not know the other three words. Beware for the shrine has been overrun with ooze.
@match *
Ah me, thank you good adventurer. I have a little knowledge that can help you on your quest.
Oh my, thank you, good adventurer. I have a little knowledge that can help you on your quest.
endmsg
x 16
y 8

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@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enter_x 8
enter_y 8
msg
Created: 2007-05-27 Nicolas Weeger
Modified: 2021-09-21 Nicolas Weeger
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
maplore
@quest wolfsburg/Lursendis
@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ msg
@match shop
Yes, of course. Step this way.
@match sentrino
Why yes, a farm hand of his came by not too long ago for livers and hearts.
Why yes, a farmhand of his came by not too long ago for livers and hearts.
@match yes|offerings|products
We specialize in orc and goblin cuts, but only their noble parts: hearts, livers, and brains.
@question shop Can I visit the shop?

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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
enter_y 7
msg
Created: 1993-10-15
Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
outdoor 1
end
@ -939,7 +939,7 @@ arch fighter
name Off duty Guard
msg
@match monsters
Yeah! Its like they were coming out of the walls, one got into the gatehouse and killed Lodus while he was sleeping, poor chap.
Yeah! It's like they were coming out of the walls, one got into the gatehouse and killed Lodus while he was sleeping, poor chap.
@match *
I can't understand where those monsters are coming from.
endmsg
@ -1578,7 +1578,7 @@ msg
@match monster
What about them!
@match *
And where do you think your GOING? Not downstairs!.... You'll have to kill me first!
And where do you think you're GOING? Not downstairs!.... You'll have to kill me first!
endmsg
x 15
y 11
@ -2425,11 +2425,10 @@ The gate opens only for certain people.
@match who|people
Only those who are
* Citizens of Scorn with a Password
* Have a merchants ``Gate Pass''
* Or knighted ``Hero'' by the king
may pass through these gates.
* Have a merchant "Gate Pass''
* Or knighted "Hero'' by the king may pass through these gates.
@match gate|pass
See the ``Office of Gate Passes'' next to the Port Gate.
See the "Office of Gate Passes'' next to the Port Gate.
@match secret|door|wall|password
I can't tell you that! Do you want to be thrown in JAIL?
@match *

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@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ height 16
enter_x 2
enter_y 3
msg
Modified: 2012-01-22 Rick Tanner
Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
endmsg
end
arch woodfloor
@ -488,7 +488,7 @@ end
arch sage
msg
@match name
I am Undling.
My name is Undling.
@match job
I am a scholar.
@match scholar