From 4b3f18fc0f2c917b067259805ae6d8c2be707e03 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kbulgrien Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2006 03:58:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] - Tweak spelling/grammar in IPO git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@4955 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712 --- scorn/shops/IPO_scorn | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/scorn/shops/IPO_scorn b/scorn/shops/IPO_scorn index 5604c6687..ef37ad929 100644 --- a/scorn/shops/IPO_scorn +++ b/scorn/shops/IPO_scorn @@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ name Scorn board end msg I am a talking board, please say something to me. -If you don't know what to say, say help. +If you don't know what to say, try help. endmsg x 4 y 7 @@ -578,13 +578,13 @@ Imperial Post Services ----------------------- Thank you for choosing the IPS to take care of your messages. Want to -get more ? We have a wide range of +get more? We have a wide range of products and services to offer to -anyone. Pirate ? Try our -TalkParrots(tm) ! Beholder ? Enjoy -our fabulous non-stereoscopical cards -! And don't forget: -The Empire Is Everywhere For You +anyone. Pirate? Try our +TalkParrots(tm)! Beholder? Enjoy +our fabulous non-stereoscopical +cards! And don't forget: +The Empire Is Everywhere For You! endmsg x 7 y 7 @@ -600,14 +600,14 @@ Sending Mail ----------------------- Get a pencil and be sure that you are able to use the literacy skill. You can -get both at the office, ask Colette for +get both at the office; ask Colette for help. -Get a preaddressed mailscroll, mark it -and write on it with: +Get a pre-addressed mailscroll, mark it +and write on it with the command: use_skill inscription -You can write multiple lines, when done -drop the scroll in the mailbox and it -will be send. +Multiple lines of text may be written. +When done, drop the scroll in the +mailbox and it will be sent. endmsg x 7 y 7