diff --git a/pup_land/lone_town/cordish2 b/pup_land/lone_town/cordish2
index 855c9378f..08c761055 100644
--- a/pup_land/lone_town/cordish2
+++ b/pup_land/lone_town/cordish2
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
 enter_y 1
 msg
 Created:  1996-01-28
-Modified: 2011-12-05 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2012-02-29 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch woodfloor2
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ arch book_clasp
 name The Siegfried-Saga
 msg
 ...
-A horrible creature emerged from the woods. Eyes blood red with a heart-piercing look. A large mouth full of teeth... fangs four inches long, blood dripping from the mouth... covering the chest. Siegfried the hero, sat in state. Tall as a tower, gaunt, with gleaming hair. The tall lord smiled, slowly rising his sword...
+A horrible creature emerged from the woods.  Eyes blood red with a heart-piercing look.  A large mouth full of teeth... fangs four inches long, blood dripping from the mouth... covering the chest. Siegfried the hero, sat in state.  Tall as a tower, gaunt, with gleaming hair.  The tall lord smiled, slowly rising his sword...
 ...
 endmsg
 end
@@ -126,8 +126,8 @@ end
 arch small_shield
 name toy shield
 msg
-  written on the shield:
-  "I am the HERO"
+  Written on the shield:
+  "I am the HERO!"
 endmsg
 ac 0
 material 16