- Fixes to Scorn IPO distributed throughout the Empire.

- Correct the mailbox instructions in various towns to
  tell the reader to ask the correct person for help
  instead of Colette in Scorn.
- A few minor tweaks also made in some other IPOs.


git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@4968 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712

azumauindo/minatomachi/stores/postoffice

@@ -2261,13 +2261,13 @@ Imperial Post Services
 -----------------------
 Thank you for choosing the IPS to
 take care of your messages. Want to
-get more ? We have a wide range of
+get more? We have a wide range of
-products ans services to offer to
+products and services to offer to
-anyone. Pirate ? Try  our
+anyone. Pirate? Try our
-TalkParrots(tm) ! Beholder ? Enjoy
+TalkParrots(tm)! Beholder? Enjoy
-our fabulous non-stereoscopical cards
+our fabulous non-stereoscopical
-! And don't forget:
+cards! And don't forget:
-The Empire Is Everywhere For You
+The Empire Is Everywhere For You!
 endmsg
 x 17
 y 18
@@ -2482,14 +2482,14 @@ Sending Mail
 -----------------------
 Get a pencil and be sure that you are
 able to use the literacy skill. You can
-get both at the office, ask Colette for
+get both at the office; ask the postmaster
-help.
+for help.
-Get a preadressed mailscroll, mark it
+Get a pre-addressed mailscroll, mark it
-and write on it with:
+and write on it with the command:
 use_skill inscription <text>
-You can write multiple lines, when done
+Multiple lines of text may be written.
-drop the scoll in the mailbox and it
+When done, drop the scroll in the
-will be send.
+mailbox and it will be sent.
 endmsg
 x 19
 y 15

brest/brest.IPO

@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ name Brest Message Board
 name_pl Brest Message Board
 msg
 I am a talking board, please say something to me.
-If you don't know what to say, say help.
+If you don't know what to say, try help.
 endmsg
 arch event_say
 slaying /python/IPO/board.py
@@ -536,13 +536,13 @@ Imperial Post Services
 -----------------------
 Thank you for choosing the IPS to
 take care of your messages. Want to
-get more ? We have a wide range of
+get more? We have a wide range of
 products and services to offer to
-anyone. Pirate ? Try  our
+anyone. Pirate? Try our
-TalkParrots(tm) ! Beholder ? Enjoy
+TalkParrots(tm)! Beholder? Enjoy
-our fabulous non-stereoscopical cards
+our fabulous non-stereoscopical
-! And don't forget:
+cards! And don't forget:
-The Empire Is Everywhere For You
+The Empire Is Everywhere For You!
 endmsg
 x 7
 y 7
@@ -559,14 +559,14 @@ Sending Mail
 -----------------------
 Get a pencil and be sure that you are
 able to use the literacy skill. You can
-get both at the office, ask Colette for
+get both at the office; ask the postmaster
-help.
+for help.
-Get a preaddressed mailscroll, mark it
+Get a pre-addressed mailscroll, mark it
-and write on it with:
+and write on it with the command:
 use_skill inscription <text>
-You can write multiple lines, when done
+Multiple lines of text may be written.
-drop the scroll in the mailbox and it
+When done, drop the scroll in the
-will be send.
+mailbox and it will be sent.
 endmsg
 x 7
 y 7

navar_city/misc/IPO_navar

@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ msg
 @match hi|hello
 Greetings.  Have a pleasant day.
 @match *
-We donna tollerate no shenanigans around these parts.
+We donna tolerate no shenanigans around these parts.
 endmsg
 exp 0
 
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ name Navar Message Board
 name_pl Navar Message Board
 msg
 I am a talking board, please say something to me.
-If you don't know what to say, say help.
+If you don't know what to say, try help.
 endmsg
 x 1
 y 8
@@ -559,13 +559,13 @@ Imperial Post Services
 -----------------------
 Thank you for choosing the IPS to
 take care of your messages. Want to
-get more ? We have a wide range of
+get more? We have a wide range of
 products and services to offer to
-anyone. Pirate ? Try  our
+anyone. Pirate? Try our
-TalkParrots(tm) ! Beholder ? Enjoy
+TalkParrots(tm)! Beholder? Enjoy
-our fabulous non-stereoscopical cards
+our fabulous non-stereoscopical
-! And don't forget:
+cards! And don't forget:
-The Empire Is Everywhere For You
+The Empire Is Everywhere For You!
 endmsg
 x 7
 y 7
@@ -582,14 +582,14 @@ Sending Mail
 -----------------------
 Get a pencil and be sure that you are
 able to use the literacy skill. You can
-get both at the office, ask Colette for
+get both at the office; ask Babs for
 help.
-Get a preaddressed mailscroll, mark it
+Get a pre-addressed mailscroll, mark it
-and write on it with:
+and write on it with the command:
 use_skill inscription <text>
-You can write multiple lines, when done
+Multiple lines of text may be written.
-drop the scroll in the mailbox and it
+When done, drop the scroll in the
-will be send.
+mailbox and it will be sent.
 endmsg
 x 7
 y 7

pup_land/nurnberg/IPO_nurnberg

@@ -560,14 +560,14 @@ Sending Mail
 -----------------------
 Get a pencil and be sure that you are
 able to use the literacy skill. You can
-get both at the office, ask Betty-Lou for
+get both at the office; ask Betty-Lou for
 help.
-Get a preaddressed mailscroll, mark it
+Get a pre-addressed mailscroll, mark it
-and write on it with:
+and write on it with the command:
 use_skill inscription <text>
-You can write multiple lines, when done
+Multiple lines of text may be written.
-drop the scroll in the mailbox and it
+When done, drop the scroll in the
-will be send.
+mailbox and it will be sent.
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 7

santo_dominion/city_hall

@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ y 14
 end
 arch statue
 msg
-This guy was way  better than that other guy.
+This guy was way better than that other guy.
 endmsg
 x 3
 y 14
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ name Santo Dominion Board
 end
 msg
 I am a talking board, please say something to me.
-If you don't know what to say, say help.
+If you don't know what to say, try help.
 endmsg
 x 6
 y 13
@@ -1645,14 +1645,14 @@ Sending Mail
 -----------------------
 Get a pencil and be sure that you are
 able to use the literacy skill. You can
-get both at the office, ask Betina for
+get both at the office; ask Betina for
 help.
-Get a preaddressed mailscroll, mark it
+Get a pre-addressed mailscroll, mark it
-and write on it with:
+and write on it with the command:
 use_skill inscription <text>
-You can write multiple lines, when done
+Multiple lines of text may be written.
-drop the scroll in the mailbox and it
+When done, drop the scroll in the
-will be send.
+mailbox and it will be sent.
 endmsg
 x 14
 y 1
@@ -1741,7 +1741,7 @@ name Petitions board
 end
 msg
 I am a talking board, designed for leaving messages for the DMs.
-If you don't know what to say, say help.
+If you don't know what to say, try help.
 endmsg
 x 14
 y 13