Fix grammar and add escape hints

Submitted by:   Daniel Ziem (issue #345)

git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@20219 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712

pup_land/nurnberg/dick/bomb

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 16
 enter_y 23
 msg
 Created:  1996-02-10
-Modified: 2012-04-07 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2016-02-04 Kevin Zheng
 endmsg
 end
 arch igate_open_1
@@ -2563,9 +2563,8 @@ x 15
 y 19
 end
 arch sign
-name Instruction
 msg
-Bomb is very powerful in this game.  Move to on the marking rune, open next door, cast create much bomb, and escape from explosion.
+Create bomb is a very powerful spell. Move to the marking rune, open the door, create some bombs, and escape from the explosion.
 endmsg
 x 15
 y 19
@@ -2903,7 +2902,7 @@ y 19
 end
 arch rune_mark
 msg
-Cast create bomb from here.
+Create bombs here.
 endmsg
 x 17
 y 19
@@ -3371,13 +3370,10 @@ x 20
 y 18
 end
 arch sign
-name Instruction2
 msg
-Wait!
-Don't turn left carelessly, or you'll catch cold breath.
+Stop! Don't move left carelessly, or you'll be hit with cold breath.
 
-Can you cast sunspear?
-If you can do, cast it, and create bombs from marking rune spot.
+Can you cast sunspear? If so, cast it and create bombs near the marking rune.
 endmsg
 x 20
 y 18
@@ -3833,7 +3829,7 @@ y 23
 end
 arch sign
 msg
-On this corridor, you cannot use magic except marking rune spot.
+In this corridor, the only place you can use magic is on the marking rune.
 endmsg
 x 23
 y 23

pup_land/nurnberg/dick/bomb1

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 16
 enter_y 19
 msg
 Created:  1996-12-25
-Modified: 2012-04-07 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2016-02-04 Kevin Zheng
 endmsg
 end
 arch blocked
@@ -3026,7 +3026,7 @@ end
 arch sign
 name Instruction
 msg
-Bomb is very powerful in this game.
+Create bomb is a very powerful spell.
 1. Move to on the marking rune and invoke create earth wall to the north.
 2. Pull the lever to open the gate.
 3. Move on to the marking rune and invoke create bomb to the north.
@@ -5014,7 +5014,7 @@ y 25
 end
 arch sign
 msg
-On this corridor, you cannot use magic except marking rune spot.
+In this corridor, the only place you can use magic is on the marking rune.
 endmsg
 x 26
 y 25

pup_land/nurnberg/dick/hell

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 18
 enter_y 2
 msg
 Created:  1996-02-12
-Modified: 2012-03-02 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2016-02-04 radish
 endmsg
 end
 arch dungeon_floor
@@ -4706,10 +4706,26 @@ arch flagstone
 x 14
 y 11
 end
+arch magic_ear
+msg
+@match open
+Click.
+endmsg
+x 14
+y 11
+connected 2
+end
 arch dungeon_magic
 x 14
 y 11
 end
+arch sign
+msg
+Stand here and say "open" to open the gate if you are trapped.
+endmsg
+x 14
+y 11
+end
 arch flagstone
 x 14
 y 12
@@ -6229,9 +6245,9 @@ y 7
 end
 arch sign
 msg
-That Dave is very strong.  So, you'd better to activate the Monster Transfer System, lead the monster to the pentagram, and transfer monster to bomb area.  You should not enter the pentagram.
+Dave is very strong.  So, you'd bette activate the Monster Transfer System, lead the monster to the pentagram, and transfer monster to comet room.  You should probably not enter the pentagram...
 
-Be careful to the mover.
+Be careful of the movers. They will push you in.
 
 Data:
 --- Dave ----

pup_land/nurnberg/dick/house

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
 enter_y 3
 msg
 Created:  1996-02-09
-Modified: 2012-04-07 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2016-02-04 radish
 endmsg
 end
 arch grass
@@ -527,9 +527,9 @@ I hate him! He is very stingy! I built his Castle, but he didn't pay enough mone
 @match dot
 Ok!
 @match tod
-Really,you want to get a death?
+Really? You want to die?
 @match extra
-Oh, You want to try the extra dungeon, do you? Then please say the keyword that is obtained by Proof Scrolls.
+Oh, You want to try the extra dungeon, do you? Then please say the keyword from the Proof Scrolls.
 @match yes
 Ok.  Please drop 5 platinum on the alter, and go to the next room.
 @match *
@@ -541,7 +541,6 @@ face human.111
 hp 100
 x 4
 y 10
-type 0
 move_type walk
 monster 1
 friendly 1
@@ -1223,7 +1222,7 @@ There are three dungeons.
  1.Click de Pon (low level)
  2.ShowInv de Pon (medium level)
  3.Bomb de Pon (high level)
-There are special items in each dungeon: one is a key, another is the Proof Scroll.  Go to dungeon and pick them.
+There are special items in each dungeon: one is a key, another is the Proof Scroll.  Go to the dungeons and get them.
 endmsg
 x 10
 y 6

pup_land/nurnberg/dick/showinv

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
 enter_y 2
 msg
 Created:  1996-02-11
-Modified: 2012-03-02 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2016-02-04 radish
 endmsg
 end
 arch afloor_right
@@ -1556,12 +1556,6 @@ arch dungeon_magic
 x 9
 y 1
 end
-arch button_small
-x 9
-y 1
-invisible 1
-connected 2
-end
 arch afloor_right
 x 9
 y 2
@@ -2019,6 +2013,7 @@ Use two spells and one item:
  1. show invisible
  2. create earthwall
  3. a heavy item
+Careful. It only works one time.
 endmsg
 x 11
 y 12
@@ -4001,6 +3996,12 @@ arch dungeon_magic
 x 22
 y 1
 end
+arch button_small
+x 22
+y 1
+invisible 1
+connected 2
+end
 arch afloor_right
 x 22
 y 2