From 6d922c5fee31445d4f2d3be1b7cce3e6dccdb8e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rick Tanner <leaf@real-time.com>
Date: Sun, 12 Nov 2023 01:20:35 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Minor punctuation, spelling, and grammar updates to NPC
 dialogue in Elven Moon Entrance

---
 lake_country/elven_moon/elvenmoon.1 | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lake_country/elven_moon/elvenmoon.1 b/lake_country/elven_moon/elvenmoon.1
index cb362ff81..cf73b8e10 100644
--- a/lake_country/elven_moon/elvenmoon.1
+++ b/lake_country/elven_moon/elvenmoon.1
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
 enter_y 7
 msg
 Created: 2006-07-23 Brad Reilly
-Modified: 2023-06-05 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-12 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 outdoor 1
 reset_group lakecountry_elven-moon
@@ -1128,13 +1128,13 @@ Elven Moon is a sacred place where the elves come to pray.
 @match elven moon|elvenmoon
 The door to Elven Moon is at the center of the lake.
 @match lake
-The lake is north east of here. Did you need help?
+The lake is northeast of here. Did you need help?
 @match yes|help|how
-One must speak the magic words, then the bridge will appear by the flowers.
+One must speak the magic words, and then the bridge will appear by the flowers.
 @match magic|magic words
-The elves change the words every now and then. Seek the guardian of the maze.
+The elves change the words now and then. Seek the guardian of the maze.
 @match guardian|maze
-Somewere in the maze is the guardian who knows the magic words.
+Somewhere in the maze is the guardian who knows the magic words.
 @match clumsy|clumsy folks
 Orcs and Trolls.
 @match orcs|orc
@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ Their axes kill many trees.
 @match tree|trees
 Ah yes... my brothers and sisters.
 @match trolls|troll
-Trolls have no respect. Not even for thier own kind.
+Trolls have no respect. Not even for their kind.
 @match *
 Hey! Careful of my roots stranger. The Elves do not like clumsy folks.
 endmsg
@@ -6475,7 +6475,7 @@ The lake helps protect the temple of Elven Moon. A password is required to cross
 @match elven moon|temple
 Elven Moon is a sacred place. You best leave.
 @match guardian
-The Guardian is somewere in the labyrinth.
+The Guardian is somewhere in the labyrinth.
 @match labyrinth
 Take the south passage.
 @match *