From a5c2e1259f0246fa931cfc68e6b3e56299410f5a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kbulgrien Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2008 05:36:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Minor dialog rework: Remove mid-sentence line breaks and break at possible paragraphs instead; fix capitalization/grammar/spelling; give fatman a name. git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@10520 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712 --- whalingoutpost/taverns/storehouse1 | 32 +++++++++++++----------------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/whalingoutpost/taverns/storehouse1 b/whalingoutpost/taverns/storehouse1 index 73cd954fa..2b285cb01 100644 --- a/whalingoutpost/taverns/storehouse1 +++ b/whalingoutpost/taverns/storehouse1 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enter_x 7 enter_y 11 msg Created: 2004-08-03 Mikeeusa -Modified: 2008-10-28 Rick Tanner +Modified: 2008-11-17 Kevin Bulgrien endmsg outdoor 1 end @@ -786,26 +786,22 @@ end arch fatman msg @match hi|hello -Hi there mate, You want to know what -we or, usually rather, I do here I bet eh? +Hi there mate, You want to know what we or, usually rather, I do here I bet eh? @match yes|what|yea -Well here is stored the shipments of rum runners and also the occasional -whaling ship whom's capitan wishes to avoid taxation... some of those -whaling ships go deep into the antarctic... +Well, here we store the shipments of rum runners and of the occasional whaling ship whose captain wishes to avoid taxation... +Some of those whaling ships go deep into the Antarctic... @match ship|antarctic -Oh yes those whaling ships go to places colder than I'd ever want to venture, this little -island is as far south as I've ever been... and we dip under zero often enough that a man's -blood starts to thin out real quick. +Oh yes those whaling ships go to places colder than I'd ever want to venture. +This little island is as far south as I've ever been... and we dip below zero often enough that a man's blood starts to thin out real quick. @match whale|whaling -Those whaling ships are built strong, that's how you can tell them from others. They often go deep into -the frozen oceans and have outposts here and there. A captain offered once to take me to a place at the -bottom of the world... I declined as I'd probably would have died from the frost... perhapse you could -get such a capitan to bring you along to one of there desolate islands... if you would want to. In -anycase the seas those ships ride upon are mighty rough and mighty cold, well below freezing all year -round! -@match bye|by|seeya -Well so long then, keep yourself safe and, If I may give you sage advice, don't go any more south then -this here little rock... go north instead. +Those whaling ships are built strong. That's how you can tell them from others. +They often go deep into the frozen oceans and have outposts here and there. +One captain offered once to take me to a place at the bottom of the world... I declined as I probably would have died from the frost... but perhaps you could find such a captain to bring you along to one of there desolate islands... if you would want to. +In any case, the seas those ships ride upon are mighty rough and mighty cold; well below freezing all year round! +@match bye|seeya +Well so long then, keep yourself safe, and, if I may give you sage advice, don't go any more south than this here little rock... go north instead. +@match name +Hmm... Gunnar, if you have to know, but don't be spreading names about, eh. endmsg hp 100 maxhp 100