From c129951144d3abcad289d406026b00ca341279e8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: rjtanner <rjtanner@282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712>
Date: Thu, 23 Oct 2008 23:45:49 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Grammar updates within magic_mouth messages

git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/crossfire/code/maps/trunk@10168 282e977c-c81d-0410-88c4-b93c2d0d6712
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 lake_country/snake_pit/Chaos_lair3 | 31 +++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lake_country/snake_pit/Chaos_lair3 b/lake_country/snake_pit/Chaos_lair3
index 4a118b8f6..a3b6a04bf 100644
--- a/lake_country/snake_pit/Chaos_lair3
+++ b/lake_country/snake_pit/Chaos_lair3
@@ -1936,9 +1936,7 @@ attacktype 1
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You sense the Chaos Lord is very near.
-Passing last battle make you feel very
-lucky. But how long will your luck last?
+You sense that the Chaos Lord is very near. Victory in the last battle makes you feel very lucky. But how long will your luck last?
 endmsg
 x 6
 y 5
@@ -2111,10 +2109,7 @@ y 34
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You feel the vibrating and burning
-air. Though you have experience thousands
-of battles, this feeling makes you
-suffocate in your own adrenaline.
+You feel the vibrating and burning air around you. Though you have experienced thousands of battles, this feeling makes you suffocate in your own adrenaline.
 endmsg
 x 6
 y 34
@@ -2203,9 +2198,7 @@ attacktype 1
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You sense the Chaos Lord is very near.
-Passing last battle make you feel very
-lucky. But how long will your luck last?
+You sense that the Chaos Lord is very near. Victory in the last battle makes you feel very lucky. But how long will your luck last?
 endmsg
 x 7
 y 5
@@ -2498,9 +2491,7 @@ attacktype 1
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You sense the Chaos Lord is very near.
-Passing last battle make you feel very
-lucky. But how long will your luck last?
+You sense that the Chaos Lord is very near. Victory in the last battle makes you feel very lucky. But how long will your luck last?
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 5
@@ -2673,10 +2664,7 @@ y 34
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You feel the vibrating and burning
-air. Though you have experience thousands
-of battles, this feeling makes you
-suffocate in your own adrenaline.
+You feel the vibrating and burning air around you. Though you have experienced thousands of battles, this feeling makes you suffocate in your own adrenaline.
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 34
@@ -2765,9 +2753,7 @@ attacktype 1
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You sense the Chaos Lord is very near.
-Passing last battle make you feel very
-lucky. But how long will your luck last?
+You sense that the Chaos Lord is very near. Victory in the last battle makes you feel very lucky. But how long will your luck last?
 endmsg
 x 9
 y 5
@@ -3248,10 +3234,7 @@ y 34
 end
 arch magic_mouth
 msg
-You feel the vibrating and burning
-air. Though you have experience thousands
-of battles, this feeling makes you
-suffocate in your own adrenaline.
+You feel the vibrating and burning air around you. Though you have experienced thousands of battles, this feeling makes you suffocate in your own adrenaline.
 endmsg
 x 10
 y 34