From dbe0ec7f9ca164fe14b27176b1412f9d998868bc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rick Tanner <leaf@real-time.com>
Date: Sun, 17 Oct 2021 01:29:52 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Grammar and spelling corrections to NPC dialog

---
 navar_city/jail/jail        | 12 ++++++------
 pup_land/lone_town/training | 10 +++++-----
 scorn/misc/jail             | 14 +++++++-------
 3 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/navar_city/jail/jail b/navar_city/jail/jail
index edf23c6a0..ff35ba2fe 100644
--- a/navar_city/jail/jail
+++ b/navar_city/jail/jail
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ height 16
 enter_y 7
 msg
 Created:  2001-10-17
-Modified: 2014-04-04 Kevin Zheng
+Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch dungeon_magic
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 4
 y 6
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 4
 y 8
@@ -1861,7 +1861,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 6
@@ -1885,7 +1885,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 8
@@ -2755,7 +2755,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 12
 y 8
diff --git a/pup_land/lone_town/training b/pup_land/lone_town/training
index c86685306..e7d37604d 100644
--- a/pup_land/lone_town/training
+++ b/pup_land/lone_town/training
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 1
 enter_y 1
 msg
 Created:  1996-01-29
-Modified: 2021-07-25 Andreas Kirschbaum
+Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch cobblestones2
@@ -579,10 +579,10 @@ end
 arch mage
 msg
 @match yes
-He is such a coward.  He always ran away from the kobolds in Room 1.
+He is such a coward. He always ran away from the kobolds in Room 1.
 Hahaha!
 @match no|cordish
-He used to live in the south-east of lone town.  But now he his missing.
+He used to live in the southeast of Lone Town. But now he is missing.
 @match *
 1,2,1,2.. Do you know Cordish?
 endmsg
@@ -1163,9 +1163,9 @@ arch fighter
 name Instructor
 msg
 @match cordish
-Cordish was my worst pupil ever.  I couldn't teach him how to fight because he always ran away.  Unbelievable that Eureca accepted such a person as royal servant.
+Cordish was my worst pupil ever. I couldn't teach him how to fight because he always ran away. Unbelievable that Eureca accepted such a person as a royal servant.
 @match *
-Here is the Training Center of Liberation Army.  Do you want to be my pupil?
+Here is the Training Center of the Liberation Army. Do you want to be my pupil?
 endmsg
 Con 30
 hp 5000
diff --git a/scorn/misc/jail b/scorn/misc/jail
index 025d62173..c1142de76 100644
--- a/scorn/misc/jail
+++ b/scorn/misc/jail
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ height 15
 enter_y 7
 msg
 Created:  2001-10-17
-Modified: 2014-04-04 Kevin Zheng
+Modified: 2021-10-17 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch dungeon_magic
@@ -911,7 +911,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 4
 y 6
@@ -935,7 +935,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 4
 y 8
@@ -1756,7 +1756,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 6
@@ -1780,7 +1780,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 8
 y 8
@@ -2605,7 +2605,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 12
 y 6
@@ -2629,7 +2629,7 @@ end
 arch guard
 msg
 @match food|meal|starve|starving|hungry
-The Guard says: Only prisoners who show remorse may eat.
+The Guard says, "Only prisoners who show remorse may eat."
 endmsg
 x 12
 y 8