diff --git a/pup_land/raffle/raffle1 b/pup_land/raffle/raffle1 index 502744dce..9734486fd 100644 --- a/pup_land/raffle/raffle1 +++ b/pup_land/raffle/raffle1 @@ -2745,12 +2745,12 @@ end arch sign name Instructions msg -You can draw the raffle here!! - 1. Go to Dungeon No.1 (downstairs) and retrieve the raffle ticket. - 2. Go upstairs and pull lever 1 on the 2nd floor. - 2. Come back here, pull lever 2 right in front of you. - 3. Then pull lever 3. - 4. At last pull lever 2 again. +Follow these instructions to draw your raffle: + 1. Go to Dungeon No. 1 (downstairs) to retrieve the raffle ticket. + 2. Go upstairs and pull level 1 on the 2nd floor. + 3. Come back here and pull level 2 right in front of you. + 3. Pull level 3 (here as well). + 4. Finally, pull level 2 again and wait for your prize to appear on the table! endmsg x 8 y 12 diff --git a/pup_land/raffle/raffle2 b/pup_land/raffle/raffle2 index 922267273..08c215099 100644 --- a/pup_land/raffle/raffle2 +++ b/pup_land/raffle/raffle2 @@ -1001,7 +1001,8 @@ end arch sign_w name Dungeon No. 2 msg -The raffle dungeon for trained heroes (~lvl 15-25). To solve the dungeon entirely, a team of two players is required. +Raffle Dungeon for Trained Heroes (~lvl 15-25) +To solve the dungeon entirely, a team of two players is required. endmsg x 3 y 16 diff --git a/pup_land/raffle/raffle3 b/pup_land/raffle/raffle3 index 241428675..43ab5b0ec 100644 --- a/pup_land/raffle/raffle3 +++ b/pup_land/raffle/raffle3 @@ -1144,7 +1144,7 @@ end arch sign_w name Dungeon No. 3 msg -The raffle dungeon for the most advanced heroes (~lvl 40-60). +Raffle Dungeon for Advanced Heroes (~lvl 40-60) endmsg x 3 y 16 @@ -2849,14 +2849,14 @@ x 8 y 12 end arch sign -name instruction +name Instructions msg -You can draw the raffle here!! - 1. Go to Dungeon No.3 (downstairs) and retrieve the raffle ticket. - 2. Go upstairs and pull lever 1 on the 2nd floor. - 2. Come back here, pull lever 2 right in front of you. - 3. Then pull lever 3. - 4. At last pull lever 2 again. +Follow these instructions to draw your raffle: + 1. Go to Dungeon No. 3 (downstairs) to retrieve the raffle ticket. + 2. Go upstairs and pull level 1 on the 2nd floor. + 3. Come back here and pull level 2 right in front of you. + 3. Pull level 3 (here as well). + 4. Finally, pull level 2 again and wait for your prize to appear on the table! endmsg x 8 y 12 diff --git a/pup_land/terminal_u1 b/pup_land/terminal_u1 index 78df70ad5..35dc44f1f 100644 --- a/pup_land/terminal_u1 +++ b/pup_land/terminal_u1 @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 13 enter_y 10 msg Created: 1996-04-05 -Modified: 2012-04-04 Rick Tanner +Modified: 2013-03-19 Kevin Zheng endmsg end arch sky @@ -1446,8 +1446,7 @@ end arch sign name sign msg -Raffles are opened! -You should know that every item in the raffles can be obtained somewhere else in Pup Land. So if you got a hard time winning, maybe you should go and search outside the raffles. +You should know that every item in the raffles can be obtained elsewhere in Pupland. If you have a hard time winning, maybe you should go and look outside the raffles. endmsg x 10 y 10