Minor grammar update to NPC dialogue in Grey Castle Entrance

darcap/darcap/circus/fz_boulderball

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 46
 enter_y 11
 msg
 Created:  2008-06-19 Chad Opperman | cromagic@sbcglobal.net
-Modified: 2023-05-29 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-14 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch altar_trigger
@@ -4782,7 +4782,7 @@ arch charwoman
 name Cleaning Woman
 msg
 @match *
-I'm glad people are such slobs, else I would be unemployed!
+I'm glad people are such slobs, or I would be unemployed!
 endmsg
 x 17
 y 21

darcap/darcap/circus/fz_lobby_ud

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ enter_x 11
 enter_y 12
 msg
 Created: 2008-07-31 Raphaël Quinet & Chad Opperman
-Modified: 2023-05-29 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-14 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch dungeon_magic
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ arch woman2
 name vendor
 msg
 @match *
-Drop gold on the tables to buy beer, popcorn or burgers.
+Drop gold on the tables to buy beer, popcorn, or burgers.
 endmsg
 x 2
 y 10

lake_country/Butakis/prison_e

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ height 16
 enter_y 14
 msg
 Created: 1995-03-29 Kundi, Xue (xkd@soda.berkeley.edu)
-Modified: 2023-06-05 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-14 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 reset_group butakisfortress_prison
 end
@@ -1851,7 +1851,7 @@ arch wizard
 name Twis
 msg
 @match name|wist
-How many time do I have to tell you that I am not Wist!
+How many times do I have to tell you that I am not Wist!
 @match save|help|release|escape
 Okay. Help me escape here and I will reward you. Here is the plan. Find Fiery, my apprentice and get the chalice of fire from him. When you get the chalice, I will tell you what to do next.
 @match chalice
@@ -1859,8 +1859,8 @@ Do you have the chalice of fire with you?
 @match yes
 Okay. Put it in the liquid that surrounds the cell. It will breach the antimagic power of it and restore my power fully.
 @match reward|pay|payment|repay
-Did I promise reward?
-Ooh, okay. As reward, I grant you permission to my private study. If you have done as I asked, come in and I will send you to my study.
+Did I promise a reward?
+Ooh, okay. As a reward, I grant you permission to my private study. If you have done as I asked, come in and I will send you to my study.
 @match fiery
 Fiery was my pupil. He had the chalice of fire. Force him to give it to you if you have to. I don't know where he is now. Search in the fortress and you may find him... I don't care if he dies.
 @match *

lake_country/small_buildings/hut_Galmorus

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ height 24
 enter_x 9
 msg
 Created: 1995-03-24 Kundi, Xue (xkd@soda.csua.berkeley.edu)
-Modified: 2023-06-05 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-14 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch grass
@@ -614,10 +614,10 @@ arch priest
 name Artheus
 msg
 @match key
-This is the key to the private study. If Galmorus send you for it, you may get it.
+This is the key to the private study. If Galmorus sends you for it, you may get it.
 @match *
 Hello!
-I don't know much. Talk to Galmorus if you have any questions. If you don't mind I'd be alone.
+I don't know much. Talk to Galmorus if you have any questions. If you don't mind I'd rather be alone.
 endmsg
 hp 200
 x 4
@@ -2303,17 +2303,17 @@ There are a lot of passwords corresponding to different mechanisms in different
 @match marsh|swamp
 Ah, the swamp! There is a password to activate the portal to go directly to the tower from the edge of the swamp. The portal should be situated somewhere near the west side of the swamp. The activation word should be the name of one of the famous people.
 @match famous
-There were quite a few famous people in the past. Ragnarok, Zykie, Kashu are the few, now that I recall.
+There were quite a few famous people in the past. Ragnarok, Zykie, and Kashu are the few, now that I recall.
 @match fortress
 Which fortress are you talking about?
 @match butakis
-Butakis has a royal library in his inner city. There are a lot of useful information you can find from the books there. There password to enter the fortress of Butakis is 'windwalk'.
+Butakis has a royal library in his inner city. There is a lot of useful information you can find from the books there. Their password to enter the fortress of Butakis is 'windwalk'.
 @match the sunset
 The Sunset Fortress?
-There is a password you need to tell the giant oak tree in the middle of the forest for the oak tree to transport you to the island on Sunset lake, where the fortress is. The word is the name of the great druid of the land. His name is Twak.
+There is a password you need to tell the giant oak tree in the middle of the forest for the oak tree to transport you to the island on Sunset Lake, where the fortress is. The word is the name of the great druid of the land. His name is Twak.
 @match mopoon
-Mopoon's Weaponary?
-Well there are two portals in his cave, that the old wizard Wist used to use as his laboratory. The password is Kashu, the legendary warrior king. However the portals are not common and may be disguised as something unlikely. One of the portal is supposed to transport you to the old wizard's tower.
+Mopoon's Weaponry?
+Well there are two portals in his cave, that the old wizard Wist used to use as his laboratory. The password is Kashu, the legendary warrior king. However, the portals are not common and may be disguised as something unlikely. One of the portals is supposed to transport you to the old wizard's tower.
 @match hello|hi
 Hello fellow. My time is precious. What do you want to ask me?
 @match *

port_joseph/goblin/dungeon2

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enter_x 4
 enter_y 1
 msg
 Created: 1994-08-27 langley (langley@fermat.dartmouth.edu)
-Modified: 2023-10-31 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-14 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 reset_group portjoseph_goblin-island
 end
@@ -1400,7 +1400,7 @@ Key? You must be thinking of my cousin upstairs. He keeps all the keys.
 @match buggle
 That's me name. What's it to ya?
 @match *
-Yeah, so you killed all my gang. You don't want to mess we me. Or my dogs. You are free to go.
+Yeah, so you killed all my gang. You don't want to mess wit me. Or my dogs. You are free to go.
 endmsg
 hp 100
 x 12

pup_land/ancient/castle/castle.2

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 24
 enter_y 3
 msg
 Created: 1996-12-09
-Modified: 2023-06-09 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-16 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch marble
@@ -2603,7 +2603,7 @@ x 13
 y 14
 end
 arch prisoner
-name dieing prisoner
+name dying prisoner
 msg
 @match *
 Go away... Nobody can help me anymore..
@@ -4597,10 +4597,10 @@ x 25
 y 14
 end
 arch prisoner
-name dieing prisoner
+name dying prisoner
 msg
 @match *
-Go away... Nobody can help me anymore..
+Go away... Nobody can help me anymore...
 endmsg
 hp 100
 x 25

pup_land/ancient/castle/castle.ud1

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 3
 enter_y 3
 msg
 Created: Andreas Vogl (red.blaze@gmx.net)
-Modified: 2023-06-09 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-16 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch marble
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ arch woman2
 name Lara
 msg
 @match marr[iy]
-My husband's name is Romeo. If you ever see him, tell him that I love him and that I'll wait for him in afterlife! There's no way for you to set me free, I'm heavily chained... *crying*
+My husband's name is Romeo. If you ever see him, tell him that I love him and that I'll wait for him in the afterlife! There's no way for you to set me free, I'm heavily chained... *crying*
 @match romeo
 He is working on the translation of ancient scripts. The Evil Masters don't want them to be translated... And now they captured me to punish him!
 @match *

quests/greyshield/Castle

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ enter_x 15
 enter_y 30
 msg
 Created: 1996-09-16 Chris Jeske
-Modified: 2023-06-09 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-16 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 end
 arch woods_3
@@ -4022,7 +4022,7 @@ Ahh... I have heard the Grey King keeps his treasure in a secret underground for
 @match underground|fortress|dungeon
 There is a passage from the dungeon to the underground caverns.
 @match caverns|secret|passage
-There is also passage into the fortress created by the wizard Lothar of Rice, who was also searching for the Greyshield.
+There is also a passage into the fortress created by the wizard Lothar of Rice, who was also searching for the Greyshield.
 @match *
 Pardon me?
 endmsg

scorn/taverns/goths

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enter_x 5
 enter_y 32
 msg
 Created: 1993-10-15
-Modified: 2023-06-13 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-16 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 maplore
 @quest scorn/ScornHero
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ Well, maybe your greed will keep you alive, then. I've known some people who hav
 @match cave
 I never explored his cave. If you can get past his pets and into his Chamber, you'll probably find something interesting. After the battle, the mountain was far too hot to be near, and I've had better things to do since then. I don't think you'll be able to pass his vicious pets unless you're at least 15th Tier in your guild. The mountain can be found north of the bend in the Great East Road.
 @match mountain
-I'll never forget that mountain. I fought a battle atop it with a dark spirit. His evil had begun to poison the land around his lair, so I challenged him to battle. When he issued forth from his cave to do battle with me, I rose into the air above him and blasted him with fire. He somehow survived that first blast, so I threw yet a greater at him. He survived that one too, so I stretched myself. The next blast of fire scorched the mountain black (it remains so to this day). Yet still, he stood against me, so I thought he must somehow be immune. Using the last of my strength, I blasted him with lightning. He was destroyed, but I never looked into his cave.
+I'll never forget that mountain. I fought a battle atop it with a dark spirit. His evil had begun to poison the land around his lair, so I challenged him to battle. When he issued forth from his cave to do battle with me, I rose into the air above him and blasted him with fire. He somehow survived that first blast, so I threw yet a greater blast at him. He survived that one too, so I stretched myself. The next blast of fire scorched the mountain black (it remains so to this day). Yet still, he stood against me, so I thought he must somehow be immune. Using the last of my strength, I blasted him with lightning. He was destroyed, but I never looked into his cave.
 @reply cave What's in this cave?
 @match sword
 You've heard the rumors about the goings-on in Navar, at the end of the Great East Road?
@@ -2374,7 +2374,7 @@ I chop down trees in the forest.
 I chop them down in the great forest to the east. I wandered across a great tower one time.
 @reply tower A tower?
 @match tower|great
-The tower of Sokoban. Apparently, he was a puzzle creator. For those that can solve the puzzles, there is rumored to be a nice treasure.
+The tower of Sokoban. Apparently, he was a puzzle creator. For those who can solve the puzzles, there is rumored to be a nice treasure.
 endmsg
 x 11
 y 14
@@ -4970,7 +4970,7 @@ Jack. Just call me Jack... A - 3
 @match bingo
 Yes! A great contest today, I am going to be rich, just look at this crowd! SUCKERS! ... C - 3
 @match crowd
-Oh, WE HAVE A WINNER, next game in 10 minutes.
+Oh, WE HAVE A WINNER, the next game is in 10 minutes.
 @match *
 B - 5 ... B -
 endmsg
@@ -5123,9 +5123,9 @@ I got injured trying to kill the monsters in Castle Aaaarg.
 @reply castle What castle?
 @match castle|aaaarg
 It's full of a lot of nasty monsters - wyverns, giants, beholders. Do you want to go there?
-@reply yes Yes, I really want to go.
+@reply yes Yes, I want to go.
 @match yes
-It's almost directly to the northeast of Scorn - about 400 chains. The easiest way to get there is to take the north road outside of Scorn. Once you get past the lake, start heading east/northeast - you will need to climb over some mountains. If you run across a river, just start going north - keep going north past the like it flows from - about 75 chains. The castle is in a valley with some hills and woods.
+It's almost directly to the northeast of Scorn - about 400 chains. The easiest way to get there is to take the north road outside of Scorn. Once you get past the lake, start heading east/northeast - you will need to climb over some mountains. If you run across a river, just start going north - keep going north past the lake it flows from - about 75 chains. The castle is in a valley with some hills and woods.
 @match *
 Buzz off. Can't you see I am in pain!
 @reply pain Why are you in pain?
@@ -6368,7 +6368,7 @@ She's a sight for sore eyes, eh?
 Oh, do you have news about the war?
 @reply war What war?
 @match no|where
-You can go there by using the dragon transport found at the west end of the Scorn port area. It really is worth a trip - even if a war is going on!
+You can go there by using the dragon transport found at the west end of the Scorn port area. It is worth a trip - even if a war is going on!
 @reply war What war?
 @match pupland|war|pup land
 There is a war going on in Pup Land, but rumors say that the one who solves the mysteries of the lands is rewarded with unsurpassable power, so all sorts of people still go there on a quest for glory.
@@ -7203,7 +7203,7 @@ Yes, I'm looking over my notes about a ruined building in the middle of the dese
 @match building
 Don't know much about it. It is probably full of nasty monsters after all of this time.
 @match desert
-It is in the north-eastern part of the continent. Can't really miss it.
+It is in the northeastern part of the continent. Can't miss it.
 @match job
 Professor Emeritus of Empirical History.
 @match *
@@ -7385,7 +7385,7 @@ Awiergan Cynricson at your service!
 @match hello|hi
 Hi! I'm studying Summoning at the Tower of Demonology and Summoning up north. Are you interested in studying Summoning also?
 @match yes
-Well, you'll need the entrance fees. They're pretty extortionate. Ask about "admissions," they'll let you know how much it is these days.
+Well, you'll need the entrance fees. They're pretty extortionate. Ask about "admissions," and they'll let you know how much it is these days.
 @match stories
 Well, it's rumored that each of the Summoning Masters has powerful items which are the trappings of their office. Four of them together guard still greater treasures. The Summoning Masters are rather powerful. I bet it'd take someone at least 15th rank in their guilds to kill one. If you want to go try your luck, the Tower is North of Santo Dominion, by the Sea.
 @match job

scorn/taverns/goths2

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ height 30
 enter_x 31
 enter_y 1
 msg
-Modified: 2023-06-13 Rick Tanner
+Modified: 2023-11-16 Rick Tanner
 endmsg
 maplore
 The nightman down the hall spots you and shouts "HALT! THIEF!!!" It seems they have mistaken you with somebody else.
@@ -3806,7 +3806,7 @@ Yeah, under the table..... geez did you study your rogue book?
 @match name
 Just call me Toad... shhh.
 @match job
-Ohhhhh... newbies! SO much to learn!
+Ohhhhh... newbies! So much to learn!
 @match who|he
 Don't ask too many questions. Let's focus on this chest.
 @match *