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- Grammar police on patrol ;-) Capitalize proper names. Replace use of 

passive voice from the Getting out of Scorn description to better match the
  style of other descriptions (but leave other occurances alone).  Replace
  contractions (won't).  past --> pass.  Change use of "you" to "me" to
  improve consistency with the rest of the file.


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quest scorn/CityGate
title Getting out of scorn
title Getting out of Scorn
description
The main gates of the city of scorn are locked, and the guards won't let you past.
The main gates of the city of Scorn are locked, and the guards will not let you pass.
end_description
restart 0
step 5
description
I need to find a way to be allowed through the gates of scorn.
I need to find a way to get permission to pass through the gates of Scorn.
end_description
end_step
step 10
description
In order to be let past I need to get a port pass, find the password, or become the hero of scorn. Perhaps one of the guards can give me some advice on how to do these things.
In order to pass through the gate I need to get a port pass, find the password, or become a hero of Scorn. Perhaps one of the guards can give me some advice on how to do these things.
end_description
end_step
step 20
finishes_quest
description
I have been permitted to pass through scorn city gate.
I have been permitted to pass through Scorn city gate.
end_description
end_step
end_quest
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quest scorn/PortGate
title Down to the docks
description
There is a gate separating the main part of scorn from the docks. It is closed and the guards won't let you past.
There is a gate separating the main part of Scorn from the docks. It is closed and the guards will not let me pass.
end_description
restart 0
step 5
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end_step
step 10
description
To pass through the gates I need to get a port pass, find the password or become the hero of scorn. Perhaps one of the guards will tell me how I can do one of those things.
To pass through the gates I need to get a port pass, find the password or become a hero of Scorn. Perhaps one of the guards will tell me how I can do one of those things.
end_description
end_step
step 20
finishes_quest
description
I have been granted passage through scorn port gate.
I have been granted passage through Scorn port gate.
end_description
end_step
end_quest
@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ quest scorn/GatePass
title Gate Pass
parent scorn/CityGate
description
Acquire a gate pass to be allowed out of the main gate of scorn.
Acquire a gate pass to be allowed out of the main gate of Scorn.
end_description
restart 0
step 10
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end_step
step 20
description
I found some graffiti on the wall of goth's tavern, which claimed that the gate Password was "Chain"
I found some graffiti on the wall of Goth's tavern, which claimed that the gate Password was "chain".
end_description
end_step
step 30
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restart 0
step 10
description
I have spoken with Alfalfa in scorn jail, she was arrested for streaking and now the guards won't give her any clothes. She asked me to fetch something for her to wear from her house. Fran at the Barking Mule keeps a spare key for her house.
I have spoken with Alfalfa in Scorn jail, she was arrested for streaking and now the guards won't give her any clothes. She asked me to fetch something for her to wear from her house. Fran at the Barking Mule keeps a spare key for her house.
end_description
end_step
step 20