Minor dialog rework: Remove mid-sentence line breaks and break at possible

paragraphs instead; fix capitalization/grammar/spelling; give fatman a name.


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enter_y 11 enter_y 11
msg msg
Created: 2004-08-03 Mikeeusa Created: 2004-08-03 Mikeeusa
Modified: 2008-10-28 Rick Tanner Modified: 2008-11-17 Kevin Bulgrien
endmsg endmsg
outdoor 1 outdoor 1
end end
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arch fatman arch fatman
msg msg
@match hi|hello @match hi|hello
Hi there mate, You want to know what Hi there mate, You want to know what we or, usually rather, I do here I bet eh?
we or, usually rather, I do here I bet eh?
@match yes|what|yea @match yes|what|yea
Well here is stored the shipments of rum runners and also the occasional Well, here we store the shipments of rum runners and of the occasional whaling ship whose captain wishes to avoid taxation...
whaling ship whom's capitan wishes to avoid taxation... some of those Some of those whaling ships go deep into the Antarctic...
whaling ships go deep into the antarctic...
@match ship|antarctic @match ship|antarctic
Oh yes those whaling ships go to places colder than I'd ever want to venture, this little Oh yes those whaling ships go to places colder than I'd ever want to venture.
island is as far south as I've ever been... and we dip under zero often enough that a man's This little island is as far south as I've ever been... and we dip below zero often enough that a man's blood starts to thin out real quick.
blood starts to thin out real quick.
@match whale|whaling @match whale|whaling
Those whaling ships are built strong, that's how you can tell them from others. They often go deep into Those whaling ships are built strong. That's how you can tell them from others.
the frozen oceans and have outposts here and there. A captain offered once to take me to a place at the They often go deep into the frozen oceans and have outposts here and there.
bottom of the world... I declined as I'd probably would have died from the frost... perhapse you could One captain offered once to take me to a place at the bottom of the world... I declined as I probably would have died from the frost... but perhaps you could find such a captain to bring you along to one of there desolate islands... if you would want to.
get such a capitan to bring you along to one of there desolate islands... if you would want to. In In any case, the seas those ships ride upon are mighty rough and mighty cold; well below freezing all year round!
anycase the seas those ships ride upon are mighty rough and mighty cold, well below freezing all year @match bye|seeya
round! Well so long then, keep yourself safe, and, if I may give you sage advice, don't go any more south than this here little rock... go north instead.
@match bye|by|seeya @match name
Well so long then, keep yourself safe and, If I may give you sage advice, don't go any more south then Hmm... Gunnar, if you have to know, but don't be spreading names about, eh.
this here little rock... go north instead.
endmsg endmsg
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maxhp 100 maxhp 100